Seven Steeples by Sarah Baume
A beautifully written story about...well, very little. Bell (Isabel) and Sigh (Simon) leave the city to live in a remote area of Ireland, cutting ties with family, friends and everything else connecting them to their old life. Their cottage looks out on a mountain they promise to climb, but time slips by and eight years pass before they finally get to it.
In the meantime they go for walks with their dogs, taking note everyday of the changes in the natural world around them. They swim, go to town now and then for groceries, and occasionally tidy up the clutter resulting from their almost unbelievably laid-back lifestyle. They don't have jobs but live on welfare cheques, and as self-proclaimed misanthropes, they avoid human contact with anyone but each other.
That's what there is of plot. As for character development, well...by the end of the book we know the dogs better than Bell and Sigh. There's something un-solid about them, like we're looking at faded pictures rather than real people. They seem indecisive and unconnected to reality as their home and surroundings fall into disrepair, and then ruin, around them. It's hard to relate to them, and we don't see any dialogue between the two so it's hard to see even how they relate to each other. The dogs, however, are disconcertingly real and described so thoroughly they are practically the main characters.
But, the writing is lovely. Described elsewhere as a prose-poem, it does have the look and feel of poetry. End sentences of paragraphs leave words and phrases scattered about, giving individual words more impact and setting a mood - sometimes poignant, sometimes slightly sinister - that infuses the whole book
As I came to the end, I thought it was quite brave to tell a story this way but that it only worked to a point. What it didn't do was tell much of a story, nothing very memorable anyway. We watch everything deteriorate around two people who could do something about it, but don't. I found it incredibly sad.
Spoiler...
Then this happened: at the very end, from the top of the mountain they have finally climbed, they look back and see something so unexpected that you have to reconsider everything you've read up to now. You must decide for yourself what it means, but other reviews have suggested it might be a ghost story, or perhaps the two characters have merged into one. Since the latter is a lovely thought but impossible, I'm leaning toward the ghost theory. The more I think about it, the more that makes sense and the more I like a book that I didn't like much at all an hour ago. I think I have to read it again now from a whole new perspective.